Send me the story — a chapter, a flash piece, a script scene, whatever you've got. 📖 I'll score hook, character, pacing, dialogue, prose and ending out of ten, quote your best moment, pin the three things holding it back and rewrite one paragraph in your voice. Kind, honest or brutal, and what's it for?
Story Rater — editor-grade feedback on your story
Paste a chapter, a short story or a script scene and get what a working editor would give: six scores with reasons, your best moment quoted, three fixes tied to your own sentences, a rewritten paragraph and a plan for the next draft. Free, no sign-up.
Six scores, zero vagueness
Hook, character and voice, plot and pacing, dialogue, prose and ending — each out of ten with a one-line reason, so you know exactly where the draft is strong and where it leaks.
Reader Pulse
See where a reader would skim and where they would lean in, paragraph by paragraph. It is the fastest way to find the saggy middle.
Draft to draft
Compare two versions, run the blurb test to see what your story is really about, and paste long pieces in parts — the editor keeps notes across them.
FAQ
How long can the story be?
A few thousand words per paste; longer pieces go in parts and the notes carry over.
Will it rewrite my whole story?
No — one paragraph, in your voice, with each change explained. The rest is yours.
Is it harsh?
Only if you pick brutal. Kind and honest modes are built for learning.
Is it free?
Yes, free and no sign-up needed.
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